Freestyle Writing by Auckland

The eagle perched. The jaguar stalked. 

The travellers trudged. The vultures soared.

Something amazing was happening at Sun City.

All creatures great and small were gathering around waiting to

see what happens at the moot. 

Sun City was in the middle of the desert and still stands today.

It was a city full of terrific sightseeing. It was a place like nothing else.

It was dangerous, mysterious and adventurous. It was the annual moot. 

A ‘moot’ is a special kind of meeting, usually to make important decisions. 

The people who attended the moot were the king of Egypt and his disciples.

The King of Egypt proclaimed that his son will be the new King.

The king was very selfish , he would take everything for himself and his family.

Leaving the people of Egypt hungry and sick.

So when he declared his son to be king everyone was thrilled.

His son was the kindest person you will ever meet.

He was a kind and caring person that always put others before him.

His name was King Ramesses II.

My Inspiration by Auckland

A role me who inspires me is Bill Gates.
He is a organised , hard worker and shows leadership when he works.

Bill is a organised man who is the founder of microsoft. He has been working for microsoft over 43 years. He is always focused on work and technology. An example of Bill being organised is that he plans to improve in making better technology by being always focused on his work. By being organised it helps you to finish work and be more organised next time.

Bill is a hardworking man who creates technology and works for microsoft.  He is a successful man. He is successful because he is a hardworking person who is always committed to his work. An example of bill being a hard worker is that he works for hours trying to improve his technology. By being a hard worker bill has continued to achieve many great and amazing things.

Bill is a man who shows lot of leadership. Bill is the owner of microsoft. Bills leadership helps microsoft produce lots of products. His leadership made his company sell millions of their products.An example of showing leadership is during a basketball team. A basketball team has a captain. The captain leads  your team to victory. But instead of that Bill leads his company to produce safe products. By showing leadership Bill carries on to become a very successful man.

In conclusion , showing  these key ideas can help you achieve great things in life. You can become successful. Maybe one day you might be the next bill gates.

             

Free Style Writing - Hailstones by Edith

On Tuesday we were very fascinated with the way it rained with hailstones. We were encouraged to descriptively describe this moment. We were required to use figurative language to help us critically describe what we saw, heard and felt. 

🌧️In The Moment..Hailstones🌧️

"Tap, tap, tap" gently upon the building,

the cold, frozen water it's not want we need,

the gods must be in a low spirit,

so the hailstones are in all kinds of sizes and speed.

I can hear the water drifting and pouring its way down the roof.

I can hear the tree's whistling as the leaves are in a groove.

A big sheet of grey wants to come cover our sky,

shattering glass, and frozen rain which is now solid ice.

The thunders now coming to join in on the fun,

no more kids playing, and no more bright sun.

Then following are tiny droplets of rain,

"Splish, Splash, Splosh",

It's a slushy based on life, and it just froze my brain.