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Friday, 8 May 2020

Freestyle Writing by Auckland

The eagle perched. The jaguar stalked. 
The travellers trudged. The vultures soared.
Something amazing was happening at Sun City.
All creatures great and small were gathering around waiting to
see what happens at the moot. 

Sun City was in the middle of the desert and still stands today.
It was a city full of terrific sightseeing. It was a place like nothing else.
It was dangerous, mysterious and adventurous. It was the annual moot. 
A ‘moot’ is a special kind of meeting, usually to make important decisions. 

The people who attended the moot were the king of Egypt and his disciples.
The King of Egypt proclaimed that his son will be the new King.
The king was very selfish , he would take everything for himself and his family.
Leaving the people of Egypt hungry and sick.

So when he declared his son to be king everyone was thrilled.
His son was the kindest person you will ever meet.
He was a kind and caring person that always put others before him.

His name was King Ramesses II.
Was Ancient Egyptian Pharaoh Ramesses II Really That Great ...

Thursday, 22 November 2018

Free Style Writing - Hailstones by Edith

On Tuesday we were very fascinated with the way it rained with hailstones. We were encouraged to descriptively describe this moment. We were required to use figurative language to help us critically describe what we saw, heard and felt. 


๐ŸŒง️In The Moment..Hailstones๐ŸŒง️
"Tap, tap, tap" gently upon the building,
the cold, frozen water it's not want we need,
the gods must be in a low spirit,
so the hailstones are in all kinds of sizes and speed.

I can hear the water drifting and pouring its way down the roof.
I can hear the tree's whistling as the leaves are in a groove.
A big sheet of grey wants to come cover our sky,
shattering glass, and frozen rain which is now solid ice.

The thunders now coming to join in on the fun,
no more kids playing, and no more bright sun.
Then following are tiny droplets of rain,
"Splish, Splash, Splosh",
It's a slushy based on life, and it just froze my brain.