WALT: Write Complex Sentences
Today we've been learning to make a complex sentence, these are useful for the future, such as resume for a job you won't. Here is my work !
Today we've been learning to make a complex sentence, these are useful for the future, such as resume for a job you won't. Here is my work !
Hey Coralee, my name is Parwin and I am a Year 8 from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your blog post because it caught my attention and I wanted to find out more about your blog post.
I can see that your blog post is a DLO about how to write a complex sentence. This reminded me of when one of my teachers, Mrs Taylor, taught us how to write complex sentences and what the difference were but I forgot some parts but luckily, when I read your slides, I remembered!
I think that maybe next time you add some more information about why you did it to make your blog post even better.
Why did you decide to do your blog post about how to write complex sentences? Were you learning about it?
Looking forward to your next posts,
Parwin
Hello, TPS Kia Manawanui my name is Jacob from Yaldhurst Model School. I am a year 8 I really Enjoyed your blog post what you did. About Back to Basics by Coralee I really like your slide about it. It looks cool to learn about it next time you should add a video in of you self doing the slide. But keep up the good Work bye.
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