IALT: Post a Positive, Helpful, and Thoughtful comment on my buddy class blogs.
Kia Ora and welcome back to my blog! I know I haven't been blogging much lately and I just wanted to let you all know that I really am trying my best to find something to blog about or to complete my work to be able to blog it. Right now I will be sharing with you all my 2 blog comments that I have posted on my buddy class blogs.
Hi I am Zack from Yaldhurst I am year 6.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the way you added a photo but I think you could still add some more pic's for extra affect. I also really like this blog post because you have use lots of words I mean lots of words.
I think a really good improvement point would be to add your picture's next time on a doc or something so its not like a toilet roll :) I really like this blog in lots of ways, it brought me back to when I was doing my first blog comment's.
I liked reading you exzample's:):)
What made you do this blog post?
Do you like doing things like this?
Thanks Zack from Yaldy.
Hello, TPS Kia Manawanui this blog post is cool I really liked reading this blog post. About Buddy Class Commenting it looks really cool to learn about commenting and write a positive and a thought full comment. I really enjoy reading the comments you did on the blog post. It looked like a positive and a thoughtful comment to your buddies. I hope you enjoyed doing this work well bye,
ReplyDeleteKia ora TPS and Hevani, I am Thom from Yaldhurst.
ReplyDeleteI love blogging and it is great to do it quite often and even though you just said you haven't been blogging as much its good to even just blog now and then.
What a great combo, comments in a blog, I've never thought of that. Also these are really good quality comments, because there's no point in commenting if its not quality.
Are you proud of these comments? Is this usually the size of your comments?
Maybe next time you could show the first comment you did and show the difference between them.
Great blog and comments, Keep it up.
From Thom
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ReplyDeleteHey There!
ReplyDeleteI'm Teegan, a year 7 from YMS.
It's really nice how you had blog commenting class at your school!
Blogging is a great thing to do every now and then.
Also, you have done such great quality comments that you deserve a reward!
I think you have done an Excellent job with this post Hevani!
Kind Regards,
- Teegan .J.D
Hi I am Albin from Yaldhurst.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the way you presented theses blog comments in this blog post.
I think this blog comments was amazing.
If you had add some photos of which blog post you commented to then it would have been amazing.
From Albin
Hello, My name is Bridget from Yaldhurst Model School. This is amazing becuase you had a decription and exsplained, you also added a DLO. This post Reminded me of when another blog that I have seen that was pretty much the same. So that is pretty amazing. Maybe you next time you could put them onto a slide and add some colour.
ReplyDeleteKa Pai.
Bridget.
Hello, my name's Dion from YMS (Yaldhurst Model School).
ReplyDeleteI like reading this because these comments are clear and describes what they need to do. Maybe next time you could be a bit more creative.
Thank you
Dion
Hey hevani i really enjoyed or post and that u have done an amazing work with ur blog buddies from other school .
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