IAL : how to create 7an blog trailer.
To help me create a blog trailer I used a planning criteria.
We are a Year 7 and 8 class at Tamaki Primary School. Our teacher is Mr Janse and we really enjoy sharing our work with others.
We are a Year 7 and 8 class at Tamaki Primary School. Our teacher is Mr Janse and we really enjoy sharing our work with others.
kia ora Raymond, my name is Hiria I really love how you have shared to us about your blog in that screencastify amazing ako keep up the great work Raymond.
ReplyDeleteHey Raymond ,
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you have used a plan to create a blog trailer.
I also loved how you sticked to the time frame (30 sec ).
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Deletethanx mmate i really love your one to you did great
DeleteThanks mate, I really Like your video to.
DeleteTalofa lava Raymond,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Hope and I love the way you explained to us about what your blog is for and I learnt a lot from your screencastify.
Keep up the great work!
hope you the a 100 :/: in your awesome work your way better than me with work
Deletenice job Raymond you really explained your blog well good job.
ReplyDeleteThanks stan the man i really bet you did a way better job keep it up stan the man
DeleteHey Raymond,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Coralee and i'm a year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School. I really liked your video but there was something that ticked me off and that was Timote's head, but to be honest it was a good Blog Trailer. Keep up the good work!
thanks coralee you did a amazing job to # raymond
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DeleteHi Raymond
ReplyDeleteGreat job on the video, you stuck to the time limit and did what was instructed.
Nice work
thank u abby u have also done a amazing great job keep it up
DeleteMalo e lelei Raymond My name is Senitila and I am a year 7 Student at Tamaki Primary in the Kia Manawanui Syndicate I admire you big loud voice and Explaining your learning well. Ka Pai Keep It up!
ReplyDeleteSEN u have done the best of the best keep it up
DeleteGreat screen casting Raymond...and congratulations in showcasing you blog on the class blog. I appreciated the effort and authenticity in you work and admired that that managed to meet the criteria. Tino Pai!
ReplyDeleteKia ora!
ReplyDeleteI'm Nikita from YMS, I had some issues that you may want to check, What you used to submit this told me "You need to be given Access by the owner" so it wasn't being shown, I thought this may be a problem you would like to check.
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