tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3090600719991959481.post6507365952552573616..comments2023-09-14T02:10:45.987+12:00Comments on Kia Manawanui - Be Big Hearted 2021: The Journey by Mehi (Recount Writing)TPSBlogOwner3http://www.blogger.com/profile/10906831084077873883noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3090600719991959481.post-60699130357901686852015-03-25T16:28:15.816+13:002015-03-25T16:28:15.816+13:00Hi Mehi I really like how you put really descripti...Hi Mehi I really like how you put really descriptive words in you really hooked me into your recount and like Miss Kyla said check your I's and maybe a WALT next time.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3090600719991959481.post-74979527803264935012015-03-02T11:03:12.726+13:002015-03-02T11:03:12.726+13:00Nice recount writing, Mehi! We liked the way you ...Nice recount writing, Mehi! We liked the way you used similes "like a driftwood." We especially liked the way you described the wind. Remember to use capital 'i's when you are saying 'I'm' because 'i' is like another name for yourself. From Room 9Miss Kylahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03513924264112982215noreply@blogger.com